This has nothing to do with any of your stories. I just wanted to say that I'm sorry for how I respond to your comment. I shouldn't have taken you criticism so personally. I just felt I needed to express this to you.
Author's Response: Thank you for the apology. I\'ll be sending you a PM, since it\'s hard to have a conversation in review format.
I read a few of your drabbles, and find them to be amazing! You're very creative, unlike me. Thank you for the advice on my story. I edited it, because you were right about having too many descriptions. I wasn't really getting right down to the point, so now it's only 976 words long. :) Good luck with your writing!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed the drabbles. A drabble is an extreme example of pared-down writing. There\'s nothing wrong in using descriptive language in a story. You just need to develop a sense of how much is appropriate for your particular story. It\'s like make-up: the right amount, properly applied, can enhance someone\'s looks; too much can ruin even the most beautiful face.
You do have creativity. You have talent -- you just need to practice, and to learn some of the rules and techniques of good writing. I\'ve had more practice than you, and I\'m *still* trying to improve my writing. The same is true of all the good fan fiction writers I know. We struggle with our stories and re-write sections that don\'t feel right. When we have a finished draft, we send it to a beta reader who looks it over for mistakes. Professional writers do the same thing.
Keep reading, keep learning, and above all -- keep writing!