You know, you're a brilliant writer. I hope you realize that. I just started reading the first few paragraphs of this story, and can tell you have the potential to become a professional writer. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself. And you're not an idiot. And you ARE special; everyone's special in their own unique way. Just keep writing--you're doing great. The more you practice something, the better you become at it. Use different techniques to strengthen your writing abilities. Your story's good so far, and I can wait to read more of your work! Keep practicing, keep learning, and above all---keep writing!
Author's Response: Oh gosh, well thank you! I\'m sort of speechless right now! Thank you so much, and I\'m glad you enjoy it, and I\'m equally thankful for the advice. Wow, thanks:D