This is so brilliant. Great characterization, and the action is great. This could be right out of the show itself. :)
The only thing that I find a bit awkward is the pacing. IMO, it jumps around a bit too much. For example, I find myself really getting into a scene, but then it will jump to something else for a while, then jump back. But that's just my opinion.
I haven't finished reading the whole thing yet, but I am thoroughly enjoying it so far. Can't wait to read your other stories!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and I\'m very glad you\'re enjoying it. Which chapters had the pacing issues, if I might ask?
I must say best series I have read ever! The story kept me on edge and wanting to read more! I could totally see both of these stories made for AU Doctor Who. Thank you so much for writing these!
Author's Response: You\'re very welcome and thank *you* so much for reading and reviewing!
I've never submitted a review, but this is amazing! The plot is interesting, the characters stay true to their personities. I could really imagine ten2 acting exactly as you portray him: still arrogant yet so unsure. I also love the way his relationship with Rose is developing. So many Rose / Ten2 fics are just a snog and shag fest lol. Im glad to see you doing a sequel. I hope a wedding and baby are in their future. :)
Author's Response: Thank you ! I have tried really really hard to stay realistic, and true to the characters we all know and love.
I\'d let you know more, but spoilers!
I've never submitted a review, but this is amazing! The plot is interesting, the characters stay true to their personities. I could really imagine ten2 acting exactly as you portray him: still arrogant yet so unsure. I also love the way his relationship with Rose is developing. So many Rose / Ten2 fics are just a snog and shag fest lol. Im glad to see you doing a sequel. I hope a wedding and baby are in their future. :)
Author's Response: Oooh! Double the love! Thankies!!