(Also, the ending really, really worked all things considered. Okay, that's it, going to bed. Thank you for writing this gorgeous little rewrite!)
Okay, I'm just gonna...yeah. Drowning in feels here. I loved it. Just. Perfect ending. Yes. So much so. And I adored Rose standing up to John/the Doctor. So in character on both sides. And. Okay, I think the feels have overwhelmed me completely now. Loved it a lot.