Just found this series, I was actually looking for slash that featured Jack but the summary drew me in. I really like how your developing your original character, Tyler is coming along nicely I think without seeming to Mary Sue'ish and also seeming to have been raised by the doctor. Wonder if Jack will faint when he finds out Rose is pregant, that is if Jack is going to be at Torchwood in this world. I really look foward to seeing where you take this series. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: aww, thank you so much. To be honest, Tyler was originally just a means to an end. I thought he\'d be a clever way to get Rose back from the Parallel Earth, but then I realized that if he was supposed to be the Doctor\'s son, he would have to be a pretty in depth character. Thanks so much for your review.